Thursday, January 26, 2012

The chosen love poems!

Okay. After considering all the wonderful advice from the previous post I've decided to use the following two poems in my manuscript. Thank you, everyone!

ELIZABETH BARRETT BROWNING
How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of Being and ideal Grace.
I love thee to the level of everyday's
Most quiet need, by sun and candle-light.
I love thee freely, as men strive for Right;
I love thee purely, as they turn from Praise.
I love thee with the passion put to use
In my old griefs, and with my childhood's faith.
I love thee with a love I seemed to lose
With my lost saints,—I love thee with the breath,
Smiles, tears, of all my life!—and, if God choose,
I shall but love thee better after death.

PERCY BYSSHE SHELLEY
The fountains mingle with the river,
And the rivers with the ocean;
The winds of heaven mix forever,
With a sweet emotion;
Nothing in the world is single;
All things by a law divine
In one another's being mingle;--
Why not I with thine?
See! the mountains kiss high heaven,
And the waves clasp one another;
No sister flower would be forgiven,
If it disdained it's brother;
And the sunlight clasps the earth,
And the moonbeams kiss the sea;--
What are all these kissings worth,
If thou kiss not me?

13 comments:

Tony Van Helsing said...

Beautiful.

Charlie Rice said...

And I was so hoping my tome would end up in your book.

True story: In the fifth grade, the hottest girl in the class gave me a Valentine's Day card with the following poetry.
"Charlie, Charlie, don't turn blue. Frankenstein was ugly too."

Yeah, things are still the same.

Anita said...

TONY: I think so, too!

CHARLIE: Maybe the next book, I'll use your poem...with permission, of course. And you need to locate that girl, give her a piece of your mind! :)

Joshua said...

I was backlogged and didn't see your post yesterday until just now. I always suggest Neruda's Sonnet XVII or e.e. cummings' may i feel...

Anita said...

JOSHUA: Thanks! I'll check those out, too!

Bish Denham said...

Sigh...such lovely poems of love enduring.

Anita said...

BISH: I know! I want to write like this, but I am so NOT a poet.

Kelly Polark said...

Excellent selections, m'lady!

Anita said...

KELLY: Thank you! I actually read A TON of poems...great procrastination technique, btw.

oceangirl said...

I love the second poem! I may blog about it.

Hello Anita.

Rebecca Kiel said...

Reading these is a great way to start my day. Thanks!

Anita said...

OCEAN GIRL: I hope you do blog about it...it's so beautiful! I am insane here with revisions, but will be visiting all my favorite blogs soon...yours included!

REBECCA: Awww! Good to know!

Kristina said...

I love me some Shelley. Awesome.

And Browning's poem is a great choice, too, because everybody knows the first line to it...so your readers will identify with it almost immediately.

Hooray for poetry, still alive and kicking!